Srping Is Here Poem by indira babbellapati

Srping Is Here



non-stop sneezing
water dripping from
eyes red and bulged
blocked nostrils adding
nasal twang to the voice...
that sounds queerly heavy
amidst colorful floral tribute to
the earth with koel's sweetened
voice as the background score...

...o, yes!
i know spring is here
...ach...oo.., .! ! ! ! ! !

30mar2010
11.40hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is in contrast to my poem of the same title. Your title says SRPING. Is it with a purpose?

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Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

Oh that's from a different point of view... Thanks for giving a different test...

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Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

Oh that's from a different point of view... Thanks for giving a different test...

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Leonard Dabydeen 01 April 2010

ha! ha! so u thought for a moment 'spring is here' only for the birds and the bees... then realize spring cleaning is a chore, with non-stop sneezing... great allergy time, too. tell u what...i read your poem with a smile, and almost had an...ach-ooo.... and for my friend, Sridevi...why should we consider 'spring overrated' when there is endless joy to behold...before spring takes flight again. thnx for sharing.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 31 March 2010

spring accompanied by spring cleaning...and its non stop sneezes all the way.....a different kind of tribute to the overrated season...thank you

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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