Spontaneity Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Spontaneity



(dedicated to Tapas Baidya)

You settled into a happy arrangement
Look set for some renewed spontaneity

Communications flow more easily
Even so, friendship may lure you away

(inspired by Kitaro’s Shimmering Light)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 14 November 2008

I would consider this good because of its ambiguity. The reader has to stop and think about it. At least, I had to in regard to 'friendship may lure you away'.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 November 2008

One should read and follow this spontenously.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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