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Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 155 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Sound Of Nothing


has it ever happened to you to suffer from nothing?
to feel like rich kings who just like golden ring?

no, things aren't like that for us,
world is made up people with so many loss

To sell the loyalty, to gain pride,
they lie, betray, in every length and side

but never sell your garden's red rose,
or your honesty, don't let it go

Submitted: Saturday, April 26, 2014
Edited: Saturday, April 26, 2014

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  • Freshman - 1,490 Points Anthony Di''anno (5/12/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Whilst I agree with Bri's comment I took the title to mean the emptiness that resides when one has given away all that one's soul countains. I enjoyed reading your bright and positive poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,490 Points Anthony Di''anno (5/12/2014 8:23:00 AM)

    Whilst I agree with Bri's comment I took the title to mean the emptiness that resides when one has given away all that one's soul countains. I enjoyed reading your bright and positive poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,842 Points Bri Edwards (4/27/2014 2:26:00 PM)

    ellias,
    i was attracted to the title, but i don't understand why this title goes with this poem.
    the poem itself gives good advice at the ending, a warning to beware of the actions of others in the middle, and, at the beginning, it demonstrates how most people are not 'lucky enough' to have all they need and want. am i close to understanding? i think so.

    a nice one. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

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