Soulless Poem by Sarah Lord

Soulless

Rating: 5.0


Forever has no meaning
Love is no longer a word
Death is not ready for me
Living is just too hard
Pain makes sense
Freedom couldn't stay
The sun is too bright
The moon looks too closely
Confidence never came
Dreams shatter too quickly
Sleep seems perfect
Awake is what i will always be
I start to fade
My soul is long gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Extremely sad. Incredible sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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