Something Else Poem by Monalno Kim

Something Else

Rating: 4.0


Although you are strong and tall
Although you appear to know-it-all
Although you seem capable of many things
Although you believe you can fly withinvisible wings
I see something more, so deep inside
In your heart, where it has chosen to hide
And although you look like a handsome youth
I sense something else, apiece of ambigious truth
For although your voice is deep when you speak
Although your words are sensible and not weak
Although you appear self-confident, without doubt
I sense a need to cry, to be held and to shout
I sense a child within, who feels fear
i sense lonliness although in calmness you appear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Sundararamalingam 11 November 2009

although so beautiful that you wrote i know i shouldn't step out without casting my vote its great about people's mind you understood after reading your poem, i should say 'its really good'

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Yuri A. 11 November 2009

Nice one, Monalno! And this is something that's really true, how we hide behind masks and all. Thanks!

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