A Shower Poem by Monalno Kim

A Shower

Rating: 5.0


Water flowing down his black-haired head like the Greeks'
Streaming past his dark eyebrows and his deep eyes
Down his sharp nose and past his smooth cheeks
Dripping down his lush lips, past the mouth's rise

Water flowing down his strong jaws and steady chin
Streaming past his thick neck into the collar bones it trips
Down his biceps and sculptured arms that cause a din
Dripping down his hands and delicate fingertips

Water flowing down his broad shoulders
Streaming past his chest and slender warm back
Down his muscled stomach and thighs, hard as boulders
Dripping down his knees to his calves, which can bare a whack

Water flowing down his ankles to his firm feet
Creating a pool of pure liquid on the ground
Down his hard body, the water so sweet
The liquid dripping around him, so profound!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 27 November 2008

you r so good at description u do have a real talent.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Finely penned! Ammmmmmmazing rhyme! and theme is WOW! 10+

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

sensual haan--water cascading down his hard body regards anjali

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Amazing Poem! I really like the way you connect the words and how you make them rhyme..Great Job!

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