Someday Poem by kaylem 479

Someday

Rating: 5.0


he looks at me with those eyes and something inside begins to flare
it's like my entire soul burns with that single stare
just the way he smile makes me shiver inside
this feeling keeps growing and i can no longer hide
if only i had the courage to tell him these emotions of mine
but i'm too afraid, to scared that he would decline
and my poor heart would be broken not on time
but still, i'm hoping that someday would come when i no longer need to hide
finally he'll know all my feelings inside
and maybe, even maybe he'll love me too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 December 2009

very well expressed! .......

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Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with lyric ideas.......10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

indeed let love come 2 u my friend its more sweeter that way =) nice write - mel

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