Solemn Declaration Poem by Frank Adie

Solemn Declaration

Rating: 5.0


What went wrong?
That you now sing a different song?
For life we promised to ride this horse
Our oath was for better for worse
What did you find then that you can't find anymore
I am willing to make amend and even do much more
Please give us a chance to work things out
The best solution lies not in chickening out
I love you dearly, I really do
I have built my happiness around you.
My laughter starts and ends with you
Who can make me feel this way, just who?
I was born to love you and you alone
This confession of love, I will forever intone.

Monday, January 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2018

A sublime poem, but with a saddest tone, how tragic! You deserve more, dear poet! This is most caring and loving. A 10 and much much more for the voting.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

A lovely poem! .....I love you dearly, I really do I have built my happiness around you.........loved reading it.....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 January 2018

Frank, such a sweet poem👍👍👍

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