So Cold Poem by Dylan Brown

So Cold



I feel as if alone in the empty dark,
No one here for me, except for death.
pain is here and left its mark.

Was he the one causing pain
With his stupid dreaming?
How could he know his loves light
Would change his life forever?

Always afraid
Of the things he's feeling

These days go on there course inside a shrowd
its thick and suffocating

How can you say im me,
If we will never be?
search my thoughts, love of old?
how come its got so cold?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Make A Wish 06 October 2008

nice useage of words, wuite porfound and deep... i like it

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