Dark Love Poem by Dylan Brown

Dark Love

Rating: 5.0


im in your hands
every time i think of you
you let go of me
as if i was an old useless toy
nothing more that a trinket to you

and have fallen
into the cracks of my hell
i cant get up
without your help
i need you

please come down and save me
im wanting for you im needing for you
and it just gets stronger every day

but you laugh in my face
and i fall even more

i need you, so much you cant believe
i need you, for my heart to be able to mend from this place
just help me escape, i know you can
but will you? that is not known to me,
no, it is. i know you arent there for me
so i reach down, load the bullet for all to see
put it in my mouth, count to three
i knew my love could never be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Leach 07 July 2009

WOW..... I LOVE this poem it's really what I'm looking for.

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Desiree Burdick 29 December 2008

very deep yet very good

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 29 December 2008

Nice poem. It's so full of emotion. I like it.

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