Snowflakes Poem by Matin ...

Snowflakes

Rating: 5.0


Tonight the snowflakes
Are coming down
To touch your face
To let you sleep softly
In this deep whiteness…
While someone's watching you
from the corner of darkness.

How could you be
This much
Cruel to me?
I was your friend
But you did like an enemy
oh...You left me
And never thought I'll be crazy
I'm looking at your closed eyes gently
While storms are inside me
Destroying me wildly
If only
once more
you could be
near me...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(2013)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 18 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

leaving can be so painful. the meeting is always a joy

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Adeline Foster 19 August 2013

Deep into sorrow here. Read mine - Everybody Has Had Somebody - Adeline

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Smile :) 10 August 2014

this is just awesome....quite enjoyable and well written good job keep writing!

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Patricia Grantham 08 October 2013

Better to have lost and love than never to have loved at all. Life is full of ups and downs. Just don't stay down too long or you may never be able to get back up again. Love it.

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Yasmin Khan 27 August 2013

Nice and beautiful, emotions expressed in the garb of Nature

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2013

Beautiful one dear Alookh....dont feel bad ok, move on you will learn that life is more surprise in the next day, but you..you will never weak..stay true in heart to always be true you no matter how bad they are to you_Soul

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 August 2013

A doleful poem penned so nicely! Thumbs up! Gud work. Do read mine latest poem, on Imaginary land.

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