Smooth Velvet Poem by Ernestine Northover

Smooth Velvet

Rating: 5.0


Bright stars are coming out
the deep dark sky to light.
Glinting from far above
such blackness to ignite.

They beam towards the earth,
from so many miles away.
Worlds that now are empty
of life. They’ve had their day.

Tapestry of diamonds,
on lush smooth velvet seen.
Sparkling, all these jewels,
with the moon in between.

Twinkling with goldenness,
pin points in the blue.
Shining every night-time,
giving an awesome view.

Bright stars are coming out,
the air is fresh and clear.
No clouds to hide their rays,
they pierce the stratosphere.

The heavens are so vast,
with planets everywhere.
Will earth finally be,
another shooting flare.


© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brabender Josh 04 April 2008

Great description and something to think of. Loved it.

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Alison Cassidy 13 April 2008

You have combined the scientific and the artistic to great effect in this magical poem. You're right, if you could touch the sky, it must feel like velvet - soft indigo blue, worthy of pillowing the finest diamonds. Beautiful poem from a beautiful soul. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 09 April 2008

A beautiful, lyrical penning. Shine on, Ernestine. Love, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 05 April 2008

Well I'm not sure, but you certainly have a flare for great writing Ernestine Wonderful images, powerful subject matter, great artist Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 04 April 2008

Brilliant imagery, a great read Ernestine! ! thanks for the share! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Meggie Gultiano 04 April 2008

Happy to read this..Glad i was able to take a peep in your site.Take care always..

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