Slivers Of Silvery-Gold. Poem by Fay Slimm

Slivers Of Silvery-Gold.

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With sun now subsiding
Over horizon,
I gaze in sheer wonder
At what comes to me.
Channel of mystery
Narrowly opens
Atop ebbing waters
Of candy-floss sea.

A pathway of silver
Waving it's glazes,
Inviting my pleasure
With wet molten gold.
The sun is still trying
More dusky colours,
When most reluctantly
I take myself home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 08 July 2009

Lovely descriptive write, I too like to gaze at the sun setting, making a new picture every day, 10 Lynda xx

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Carol Gall 08 July 2009

just lovely fay i would not want to go either

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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