Slice Your Way To Happiness Poem by christy rich

Slice Your Way To Happiness



Why Not slice your way to happiness. If your happy why should anyone

else care? Would you dare? To be happy. To feel relief. To rid yourself

of all the grief. To smile agian. To have a friend. To feel the pain. To

watch your blood pour like rain. To cover the fears. To drown the tears.

Its the easy way out. To feel carefree without a doubt. So i ask you,

why not slice your way to happiness?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Believe me, you can slice and slice, but you won't find happiness. I think you kinda know that though. To me this poem says how slicing your way to happiness is bad. I don't know if that's what you meant. But, I understand what you're writing. So much emotion.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 December 2009

This write convey a good message, evokes to be happy. The title is very catchy. Best Wishes. Naseer

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