Sleepless Night Poem by sekharan pookkat

Sleepless Night

Rating: 4.2


The yellow petals of new rose
Attracted me and patted slowly
but the thrones concealed
by the leaves I saw not

It itched my hand slightly
The pain spread
In my heart slowly
And began to hurt at night

The fragrance of yellow rose
Spread in my room
But the pain remained insane
And presented me a sleepless night

Monday, April 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 19 April 2014

There are nights when we sleep well, there are others when we do not. If I am thinking about something seriously, definitely I cannot sleep, but if I do not take a nap next day, the night will be just lovely.

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Neela Nath Das 12 April 2014

The pathos of the poem has touched my heart! A unique poem of love and the suffering..

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Lydia Monet 11 April 2014

I like how you didn't say it was a thorn giving you pain. This means it could be anything.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 08 April 2014

Very well written! Great little poem..I just loved it.. Though the thorns gave you pain, the fragrance and beauty of the rose would have made it (pain) less...

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