Skin On Skin Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Skin On Skin

Rating: 5.0


i use to feel you
skin on skin
i long to feel
your warmth within

a loving embrace
is all i need
to make my heart
no longer bleed

tears fall
pains just begun
our memories repeat
one by one

pain so excruciating
words no longer said
i wanna feel your touch again
my heart feels so dead

your warmth is fading further
it's now farther than my touch
now i see the things you said
never really meant much

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

A fantastic poem with much emotion the only thing I'd change is put as much istead of just much but besides that its absoulotly wonderful

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Kris Smith 20 August 2008

Touching, feelings will get stronger as you get older 10 Chris

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