Sister Poem by Fatima Obaid

Sister

Rating: 5.0


Who comes next your Mother?
Who comes next your father?
Who is the one,
You share secrets with?
Who give you care,
When no one is there?
Who make you crazy,
When you are lazy?
For whom you are Pure?
For whom you always dare?
Who always listen to you,
And make your way clear?
Who is the one you fight with?
And meanwhile playing with?
The one about you never expect
The one about you can verily bet!
A friend who can never be bad,
A friend who never make you sad.
With whom your emotions run?
With whom your heart flew?
Who runs to help you,
When every friend is apart?
When surrounding gets narrow,
She becomes a wave of cool breathe.
The one you can never be selfish with
The one you are a lovely pie for.
Thou! An enormous blessing of Allah
For whom; love never ceases
You are my soul’s vital part,
From whom I can never be apart.
For you a thousand times over
With you my dreams are over
Thou art my pride!
Thou art my sister….

Monday, May 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i want to dedicate this poem to my so Honorable sister Cheetii.She is an important part of my life :) I Love you Cheeti **
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 12 May 2014

A cute tribute to thine beloved sister. She is indeed a gift from the almighty, and a blessing for us mortals.....

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2014

Cheetii must be very happy Fatima, it's a great tribute to her...to be honest with you, the tribute poems are not to be judged by any poetry yard stick or the tools of the trade but by feelings they carry...the way you have addressed her and the way you have carried this subject is all but wonderful...im grateful to you for sharing it with me...stay good!

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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Total truth and honesty of what a sister is truly like! I have six sisters, I love this perfect poem! It could be a tribute to any one or all of them! Thank you for sharing this sisterly poem! Love it! RoseAnn

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 August 2014

Relationship of a brother and sister is sometimes greater than relationship with the mother. A lovely poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2014

Ah wow a lovely poem to sisterly affections. So nice to read u again.

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Saadat Tahir 05 June 2014

its heartening to see this tribute to a lovely relationship we all learn as we go... keep going stay blessed

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Payal Parande 24 May 2014

oh how fascinating piece, wonderfully written and so sweet, i too love my sister the most.. bravo

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