Father Poem by Fatima Obaid
Father
when i opened my eyes you were there with me
you took me in your hands
your eyes were sparkling
then you said to God
thanks God you have given me a wonderful gift
you were my first Love
you were my first Rock
you were my first friend
you were my first game mate
you made me to Proud on you
you were the one who takes me higher
you held my finger and fulfill my all wishes
you fight for me when my teacher first time scold me
you wipe my tears when i fell from the stairs
you have always ignored my big mistakes
you have always caressed over my head
and solve my problem with a sweet smile
you teaches me well and now i am successful in my life
you make me happy when you say my wife is my life and my daughter is my soul
And you, you will stay in my heart As i knew from the start...
And you, you will stay in my heart Never keep you apart.
love you daddy forever
Great piece of work dedicated to your father. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
a nice tribute to your father. sealed with love and respect.
Absolutely beautiful...I, too, am a Daddy's little girl...though he passed away 15 yrs ago...I still think about all his love, every single day...and always will, all my life. I invite you to read more of my poetry, as many are tributes to my parents. This was quite simply lovely...I will rate it 10...PEACE
it's beautiful loving poem and the love dedicated to FATHER! excellent
You wrote this poem when you were in class V and I am reading it when I am in class VI. I very much liked this poem.
I also love my father. I wish I could write such a poem for my father.
Verily, a lovely tribute from a lovely daughter to a lovely father Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth the first being, the mother's. The relation of a father and daughter is an eternal bliss , a heavenly bliss A virtuous, blissful, and saintly person are you that made you to write the poem on father A lovely poem indeed, Loved reading it, Added to my poem link....10
The poem is nice in content, but to be honest with you, the sloppy language irritates me as an English teacher!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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vow! its just an amazing poem! i liked it very much! and i love my father very much as you do!