TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .


Sipping Feelings, Spiritual Red - Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

To imitate..
you have to learn how to wait,

your fear is very clear
with my heart I can hear,
with my eyes auscultate,

speed of light to a crawling
can't be rate

day by day, shedding tears
when you bear, deeply love accumulate,

your dreams were a bed, her dreams as a kid
only love her bread,

to be loved with a will
colored patience,
raising head,
to be you, eating thoughts,
sipping feelings,
spiritual red,

To be high or to fall, to be alive or a dead,
in between is a piece of a thread,

To be unique, you have to be as the greek
with a history, never fake
To be you, united be soul and mind
all of you, no one break

To be an ocean you have to be many seas,
many lakes
To be a true, always be only you.


Comments about Sipping Feelings, Spiritual Red by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • Albert Price (2/1/2011 6:23:00 PM)


    That fifth line gives me the idea that the poet has had a very sublime experience. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/19/2010 3:27:00 AM)


    Nice challenge. Enormous feelings but fake expression... I think you are hiding your fears and your desires behind strong words trying to mix your wishes with unsatisfactory reality.
    Yes my dear love is full of passion but it is not that much complicated (the way I figure from your poem) . The world started by a word and the love might sparkle with one clear confident expression.
    Hoping you get what you really want.
    Adnan.
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  • (5/3/2010 11:44:00 PM)


    I love how the meaning is masked but the whole poem has perfect meaning to you the poet. Very nice (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2010 1:14:00 AM)


    Lots of real feelings or should I say Real quotes on life as you should live, inner happiness the gem to keep the theme of of avatar....knockout write+++10
    regards
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (11/21/2009 2:33:00 AM)


    Excellent imagery, flambouyance as usual, at the top of the world.10s (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2009 1:56:00 PM)


    ohhhhhhhhh..lolllllllll you truly made me laugh.. (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2009 1:10:00 AM)


    this is nice, younger version of the proverbs...cheers (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2009 3:51:00 AM)


    'Never fake
    To be you, united be soul and mind
    all of you'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (10/31/2009 2:46:00 AM)


    Whatever I say, that will be too low a praise. This was simply amazing, one of best poems I have read. Powerful thoughts, penned in a way that the reader is forced to dwell deeper into each word and relate it to his life. Thought provoking and brilliant. The message is strong telling us to hold on to our true selves and not to try to be some one else. ' To be a true, always be only you' This line has a magical effect. This one is down in my fav poems. (Report) Reply

  • (10/22/2009 2:27:00 PM)


    Very unique style and choice of words. Excellent for a thinking audience! (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2009 6:34:00 PM)


    very nice poem almost spiritual in a sense great work (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2009 5:19:00 AM)


    Hi Tamara....
    I don't get bored reading this peom over and over again.I like the phillosophy within its words! ! It really reflects our entire lives and touches our hearts.Unfortunately, now adays, some people live with sooo many masks to cover their ugly hearts.Others are just innocent that they struggle to live while being surrounded by human wolves.
    At last, I definetly agree with you Tamara as the truth always gives our life a pure picture of reality and I hope that people who stand as advocates for the truth will find a peacefull planet to live in!
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  • (9/26/2009 5:11:00 AM)


    'To be a true, always be only you. '

    Nice line to remember..
    ....^_^...

    i agree.. the poem makes its way to the readers heart....
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  • Sandra Martyres (9/26/2009 3:16:00 AM)


    A heartfelt piece Tamara....sensitively expressed...10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2009 5:07:00 AM)


    This peom really touches every body's heart with its sensitive words.
    No doubt 10/10
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  • Jester's P (9/23/2009 8:57:00 PM)


    ”SiPPiNg FeeLiNgS, SpIriTuAl ReD”…is full of symbols that would lead the audience into reflection of ones live.
    The “Spiritual Red”, is like a spiritual war/struggle/ fullness of life with the ups and downs; hope and fear- the man’s weakness that ones a friend but turn an enemy that slowly killing him.
    The “Sipping Feeling”, is like activity of “the man’s weakness…(mentioned above) . This is the accumulation of things, of emotion and of everything just to survive regardless of what might be the effect of it neither to him nor to the other(s) .

    Realistic …I like it.
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  • (9/22/2009 4:44:00 AM)


    that is what i call a poem
    well done and carry on the good job
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  • (9/20/2009 6:20:00 PM)


    wow! this is so well written...and so true! (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2009 2:28:00 PM)


    Very true words, stripped of all pretence. (Report) Reply

  • Khilil Perry (9/18/2009 9:46:00 AM)


    These words are so true god bless (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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