A Cup Of Emotion Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

I dont find a suitable word to say except that you are from victory to another.

Ilike your poem.... very deep. the words you speak can mean anything if u have an imagination

i love this poem....hey can u read my poems i have a new poem called damage it would mean alot if you go in read it please.

its such a cup of emotions that sip by sip gets into the reader to make him feel sory for the good around him he neglected. you're a great poet Tamara..good luck.

Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

Good poem, colourfully painted

very nice work.. beautifully conveyed

beautiful write keep up the excellent work

speechless.....well wriiten

What i say, i dont have words just want to say mind blowing, fantastic and beautiful.