Simple People Are Easily Entreing The Eden Poem by Rhymer Rhymer

Simple People Are Easily Entreing The Eden



plain people are as plain as water
it takes the form of a container
but twisting people are as screw
they can't enter every thing
they either pierce or stop
so how go to the plain Land of GOD

Wednesday, May 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: simplicity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 10 May 2018

Indeed, entering Paradise we must be honest, humble and not with any problem. HOW? Just as a CHILD could be, then we can enter Heaven.Do YOU know that your Koran is in the Old Testament of The Holy Bible? And so is the Torah. The year 2018 is the age of when God was born in Bethlehem. That is our calender globally. Thank you for your lovely and interesting poem about Simple People Are Easily Entering The Eden. A 10+++++++++

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Rus Mer 10 May 2018

thank you very much for your kind appreciation

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

This is a beautiful poem on simplicity having touching inscription and nice collocation with nice theme.

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Rus Mer 10 May 2018

thank u so much for making a nice comment

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