Silent Melodies! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar
Silent Melodies!
Where are those hands,
That caressed the timeless sands?
Mist came down drizzling,
Like musical waves sizzling,
Umpteen stars cascading,
Upon the breaths it's mingling.
Ecstasy spread its wings,
Beyond dimensional spring,
Transcends sense of sufferings.
Silent waves surpassed,
Many miles across the thoughts,
Did rise and fall many times,
Before drowning in horizon rhymes.
Calm is my heart,
Cries it not, laughs it not,
On its way of seeking salvation,
Thereby shaking off its stagnation.
Dreams rings in melodies,
When it flies on the wings of ecstasy!
© 2018 Geetha Jayakumar.
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Musical waves give amazing thrill in mind after reading this interesting verse. Beyond dimensional spring we feel the important imagery. Thoughts travel many miles and across the shore of thoughts silence adds values to feel. Wings of ecstasy allows us to feel and fly high towards a realm of reality. Heart is very calm and beat sings for God. Silence is powerful to give us eternal feelings about our eternal father, nature and this universe. A deeply philosophical poem is excellently penned...10
timeless sands, waves sizzling, mingling breaths, wings, swininging, sufferings..... so many points in this beautiful poem. very poetic...... thank u . tony
On its way of seeking salvation, ------that line jumped out at me and speaks volumes to me---you have such a deep voice, a deep searching voice in your poetry... beautiful
kahaN hain vo haath jinoN ne kalateet rait ko pyaar se cHooaa hai? kohra aa paDa boonda-baandi chataakay sangeet ki lehroN ki tarah unginay taaray ho rahay hain vyapak mil jhul rahay hain saans k lemhay main
When your heart and mind remain calm you experience the divine. An inspiring poem indeed. 'Calm is my heart, Cries it not, laughs it not, On its way of seeking salvation, Thereby shaking off its stagnation.'... is a meaningful stanza. Loved it.10+++++
Silence is eloquent, blissful, and melodious. The hands of creation have made wonderful things, and the sands of time have in course of time added to its beauty. Alas, there are many who are fond of noise.
Those iprning 6 lines are the most sumptuous opening lines I have read in some time! ! Great poem! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 5:15:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A beautiful poem! Last stanza is absolutely brilliant! Loved reading this fabulous piece of poetry! (10)
Thanks a lot!