Sick Of It Poem by Melissa Ann

Sick Of It

Rating: 4.5


Can't anyone tell I've been crying?
On the inside I think I'm dying.
My stomach is at war,
My anger so bad I'm sore.
I hate myself,
So I'm cutting myself,
And I'll probably end up killing myself.

This darkness they call sadness has a hold on me,
It's s tight I can barely breathe.
I just need a hero,
Or maybe just a friend.

But why can't they see that?
Are they so blind?
Maybe they need a smack in the face,
And see me bleed.

My eyes are always red,
Nothing else needs to be said.

I'm dying,
And done trying,
And tired of crying.

Monday, April 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first time posting one of my poems so it's not very good. Please don't hate on it because writing this helps me get through my depression. I want to start posting to see if people are going through anything like I am so they can relate. And maybe. who knows, you like it(:
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 20 April 2014

Melissa Ann, I'm a fan! I like your verse, hope it make you feel better not worse! Keep writing you feeling, I think it always helps to get them out of the head and onto paper! You are a great poet! I hope you are enjoying your island too!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 April 2014

Sometimes, writing such poems as this turns out to be cathartic. You have expressed your poignant thoughts and sad and angry mind through these lines. But remember, 'I hate myself, So I'm cutting myself, And I'll probably end up killing myself.' - is not the solution. You should look for better options and be brave to face the challenges of life squarely. 'I just need a hero, Or maybe just a friend.' - Walk steadfastly with head held high, you may find either or both.

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Bill Cantrell 14 April 2014

When emotion speaks a true heart listens, the cold one judges with a callous vote, Your poem has emotions that of which poetry is made of, Some of the great poets have voiced very similar thoughts of despair. I like your poem my friend....Be proud.

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Jerry Hughes 14 April 2014

...................you appear to be wallowing in self pity.

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