She Makes Herself Look Beatifull Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

She Makes Herself Look Beatifull

Rating: 3.8


she makes herself look beatifull,
so the world cant see her scars,
she hides the sadness in those
pills, with out them, shes a broken
toy, with them, shes a painted up
show, and the darkness her light,
she makes herself look beatifull,
so her friends back off, leave her
be, give her space, to many poems
and songs in her head, and each one
needs to be written down on pretty
pink paper,
she makes herself look beatifull even
when shes by herself, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 17 November 2006

Sad but you have delivered this piece well!

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Donna Nimmo 16 November 2006

A very good poem. I can really relate to this one. You write with such feeling.Donna

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 November 2006

VERY SOLID WORK, DAVID....AND PRISTINE STRUCTURE TO THE HILT! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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