She Asked For A Poem Poem by Jim Norausky

She Asked For A Poem

Rating: 4.4


Can anyone capture the essence of another person

in a painting, photo, or written words that last?

Whose temporal life loves family and pets,

and angels, and memories of events past,

while avoiding some things like traveling in jets.

Whose professional life passes knowledge

learned from books written throughout the ages

to students viewing a computer with a menu of pages.

Whose spiritual life has infusions of grace

from God and family souls looking into His face.

Whose home life tends to the many needs of three

linked by vows and destiny without illusions.

Whose many lives commingle

to fulfill dreams of final conclusions.


(For Helene, July 4,2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 29 January 2009

As this superb poem points out in it's very first line, 'Can anyone capture the essence of another person...'. Those are quite profound words, Jim, just as this poem is a profound write. It is beautifully phrased from beginning to end, and does very effectively tell a good bit about the person, Helene, apparently a teacher. It is a very impressive write. Carl.

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Kim Barney 31 January 2016

Very nice, Jim. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

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Mannika S Raghav 31 January 2016

She asked for a poem and you wrote it. Brava! I do wish for someone to capture me somehow, lovingly, in prose /poetry, picture or portrait, any of the three.

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Kevin Wells 06 July 2008

Thinking deeply and writing cleverly. You have started out on your road and it's good to see you on it. May it be free of obstacles.

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Stephanie Saba 31 December 2008

very well said indeed! ! : ] God Bless. <3

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Susan Williams 31 January 2016

Love is the ink in that pen and thanksgiving is the pen clutched in a good man's hand. She asked for a poem, hopefully the lives spent together was the supreme poem.

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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2016

Whose home life tends to the many needs of three linked by vows and destiny without illusions. Whose many lives commingle to fulfill dreams of final conclusions.

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Souren Mondal 31 January 2016

'Can anyone capture the essence of another person in a painting, photo, or written words that last? ' Very well written lines.. You might nor capture the essence of another person in poetry, but you certainly captured the hardships of trying to do so.. Thank you for sharing..

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2016

Come on Jim. It is a beautiful write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2016

And you wrote it for her. Thanks for sharing.

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