She Poem by allan macli borges
She
Tears
She cries a silent moan into the night
For the deserved resting seems never come
Opened eyes to see… just same sight
Fears
The pain is sharp and hurts deep inside
Now she has turned dangerous to herself
Not seeing what should get things enlighten
She
Is just scared like a child
Just lost on troubled thoughts
Losing beauty throughout hard times
She
Is beautiful. On that there’s no doubt
She’s great but at time she’s blind
And I
Don’t know what to do or think about
Not helping enough writing these lines
If my kisses can’t lift you up
I’m sorry for you: love of my life.
Very beautiful and loving. Last lines uplifts the poem.10 from me, allan. Best Wishes Naseer
The understanding and meaning here was easy enough to follow. The problem is a common one. A little girl lost in herself. Loved, but not able to see anything but the misery that surrounds her. Very well presented by the writer. GW62
beautiful understanding and the deep care and concern in ur words shows deep love for ur love of ur life! ! ! .
A very good theme and very well expressed. I agree with Greenwolfe.
'She Is beautiful. On that there’s no doubt She’s great but at time she’s blind And I' Rachel Ann Butler
nice simile: ''She Is just scared like a child Just lost on troubled thoughts '' well embedded into this sad lyric poem, nice portrait, thank you for sharing.........10+++++
If my kisses can’t lift you up I’m sorry for you: love of my life.... if my love can't u lift up..... all words beautifully said..... very good write read mine 'Cry not' in this regard
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful! Lyrical with lovely sentiments.