Sham Poem by saadat tahir

Good idea tersely expressed

Excellent composition,10+++

You just concentrate on the first part and retain it, the other part would automatically be subdued. Like the thought! :) 10+++

What caused that change....? may be the time tainted its innocent infancy!

what's this abrupt change all about?

modern life summarized...this two liner shows the commanding hand...economy n compression...you know how to use all your weapons...

Short and sweet, enjoyed reading it, 10 Lynda xx

sweet and cute...thanks...10

so complete a description that further dwelling will just mar it

not the shortest pom beautifully done..10++++