Shaking Poem by Adam Wayne Mackay

Shaking

Rating: 4.3


I'm trying to display
Residual effects
Of the things that I see
From the tip of my pen
Shaking...
I hate the words
I'm scratching my skin
I must understand
Find my way back
To what made me
Begin

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Mc Creath 02 October 2015

Delightful beginning here on PH. Your wit shows in your words.

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Adam Wayne Mackay 02 October 2015

Thank you very much Mary!

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

I like this poem and can identify with it. For me it flows nicely but for the word skin. Please submit more of your work

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Adam Wayne Mackay 02 October 2015

Thank You Jane! I will be submitting more, lol im new to computers so the process of transferring my work from paper to here is going to take a little bit. Thanks again for your comment!

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

Ivan identify with this I like it. to me it flows nicely but for the word skin

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Jane Elliston 02 October 2015

I like this very much. I can identify with it.

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