! ...Shadows (Part 3) Poem by Seema Aarella
! ...Shadows (Part 3)
In the dim soothing ambience
Of the restaurant, you sat
Across fervently studying
The catalog of my eyes,
Searching for that glint
Of emotion called ‘love’…
As I sipped the tempting soup
Satisfied with objective pleasure
Descending down my throat,
You invaded the primordial mounds
Of long buried emotions
In the sorrowing pyramid of my heart
Like an obsessed explorer
Opened the sarcophagus
And breathed life into the
Mortal remains of mummified ardor
I noticed the haze dissolving,
And felt my innards stir.
You ceremoniously took me
Into the white marbled edifice
Exclusively built in your heart
The penumbra inside me
Merged with the extensive shadow
Of the everlasting monument of love…!
second is the best like the Judgement Day followed by the third like Rise of Machines....wonderful presentations and sequels
cozy composition wherein love has awaken the sleeping giant inside the heart...a 10.
Something happended beyond happening. 10 for this beautiful poem.
love... growing pyramid high... casting monumental shadow deep inside...10
yes. so you are proud. there is not a place so worthy to live than heart and the heart you dreamed. good wishes for these poems
God in heaven, Holy be your name Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done.... All I can say is a prayer and hope... You continue in stead and move From strength to strength... Such a Beautiful poem. Sincere thanks from the bottom of my heart. Yours is a true work of art.
Hmmm... After reading two parts in a row now comes the third one... It seems you are growing fast in the art of poetry, lovely and now spirituality... A maturing one... Keep growing as there is no end to progress in the domains of love, mindfulness and truth...
Seema, You have now become a specialist in writing this type of modern poetry! I enjoyed reading it! I too wish you a very happy Dewali! In fact I have also wised all my readers the same today at the end of my poem, - 'Plato's Cave Allegory', which you may like to read! - Raj Nandy
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 10:12:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Seema! Your poems are very passionate, sometimes flowing like a small rivulet smoothly, sometimes gushing with fierce sentimets and descriptions. Your shadow series is too good; reminds me the 'affair de coer' series by Indira Babbellapati.........But don't go with too many sequels....it may become stale...................................10