Severity Of Your Silence Poem by Putholi Arumugham

Severity Of Your Silence

Rating: 4.8


Heat a rod red hot
press it into my eyes so hard.
Then with your lark voice,
you can very well ask
Does it hurt dear?
that shall be million times better
then this cruelty of your silence
which kills me in seconds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 28 June 2007

wow silence strikes with that heavy hand doesn't it...great work..~hazel!

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Malini Kadir 08 June 2007

well......silence hurts this much? real good! ....................or shall we say straight arrow to her heart!

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Dee Daffodil 24 February 2007

Wow...so beautifully written...I'm very impressed! Hugs, Dee

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Misty Talbot 26 December 2006

very poignant. I ve felt the pain of silence and you have captured it in your poem.

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