Where in a peak, the icy breeze cuddles
my lonely heart and makes it frozen
taking away its warm feelings
lessening its unendurable pain
Where in the lake, the silence dwells
chasing away all my thoughts
from my brain like adrift rats
and let me stay as a sinking boat
Where in a forest, the nature kills
my ego and all my dreams
making me realize -
Im no better than autumn leaves
Where in a plain, there are no known faces
to share their love with me
causing emotional rashes – take me there
wherever those damn places be.
Wow I love how you descibed every thing in the poem it was so good I'm adding it to my faves. I think I will share your poem with my poetry club at school because I think that they could relate to your poem so much because I can really relate. keep up the good work I hope to read some more real soon. Thanks for contacting me because it means alot to me when a fellow poet contacts me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
No wonder Amber wants share it with everyone...!