Setting Out Poem by Robin Fulton

Setting Out

Rating: 5.0


The gravestones still weigh the same.
No-one has altered the dates.

No-one asks why I've come back
again. To see not graves but

that wedge in the river-bank
where the green boat leaned. My years

at home had boulders on them.
The keel never touched water.

My years tugged at weight
no longer there. The ribs now

gave their atoms slowly back.
The boat is no longer boat.

Its ghosts set out at high tide.
Its wake is a coiling script

whose fluency the words trapped
on granite could well envy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2021

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Poet Of The Day. Hoorray! ! I am very happy for you, hope that you will read this one good day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2021

An excellent poem on his past time when he still used to go with the boat. he returned to see the boat but no longer a boat, time had changed this, Despite a lecturer, he wrote such poems most heart touching poems, a true gift for creating poems.5 Stars full on TOP.

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Robin Fulton

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Isle of Arran, United Kingdom
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