September Poem by Afrooz Jafarinoor

September

Rating: 5.0


It smells of raining,
terminating,
of the summer departing!

September,
summer's tender-hearted daughter,
sheds tears in farewell!

Once again fall
roars from afar,
makes trees' complexion pale!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sochukwu Ivye 12 October 2017

Ow. That's discerning of you, dear poetess. A clear mirror of the month, September, in an elegant poetic style by you. It's short but weighty. 10+++

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 12 October 2017

It's very kind and generous of you to rate my poem like that. I wish many beautiful Septembers.

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Elena Sandu 13 September 2015

Beautiful month! Lovely choice of words September, summer's tender-hearted daughter. A pleasure to read this poem thank you for sharing!

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Clarence Prince 06 September 2015

Indeeds, September, Summer's tender-hearted daughter, Sheds tears in farewell! Sad, but the world wouldn't be the same Without the month of September! A nice piece of work, thanks for sharing, Afrooz!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 September 2015

Thanks for reading and happy September days, especially your birthday!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 September 2015

So happy birthmonth! I dedicate this poem to you, my dear Doctor, with the best best best wishes! 🌹🎁🎉❤️

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 September 2015

:) wow.. what a lovely reply! thank you, dear Afrooz

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 September 2015

September... ' my month '.... :)

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