Senryu- Your Wish Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Your Wish

Rating: 5.0


beneath fresh flowers
what you get is what you want
there are thorns and buds

Monday, May 31, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: choice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 June 2021

I simply love it

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me poet yeps poet 01 June 2021

FIVE STARS SIR IN MY LIFE I ALWAYS GOT THORNS BECAME A POET NOW MOST KNOW

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2021

Waah... U know Asim.. I had similar thought back to few days ago.. Perhaps we should collaborate for a poem one day..

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Beneath the flowers, let me choose the buds- not the thorns...Wah! 5 stars

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Great Senryu, Asim ji. i truly believe in this philosophy. It is always what you really want that you get. The choice is with us.

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