Senryu - Tears Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Tears

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as soon your tear falls
heavenly swift horse races
to make you joyous

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,life,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 04 November 2018

This is a really paradoxical truth which I experienced each time my heart could no longer hold its plenitude! Tears indeed precede joy!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

This is a beautiful concise poem on tears and joy having haunting expression. Thank you dear Asim for sharing here.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 November 2018

Fantastic Senryu. Tears compensated with joy instantly. Loved reading it.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 November 2018

I had to read this poem again! ... I love it!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 04 November 2018

Tear making the heart light.Superb!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2018

Nature avenges and revenges both. Smiles are followed by tears and tears are followed by smiles.

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Kelly Kurt 04 November 2018

I cry on a daily basis. Fortunately they are most often tears of joy.

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