Senryu- Night And Day Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Night And Day

Rating: 5.0


sunset spilled the dreams
moon intoxicated nights
amber morning sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 30 December 2020

Excellent senryu Asim

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Deepak S S 30 December 2020

Brilliant as ever, you are indeed master of this art.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 December 2020

Journey of a forelone heart.5***

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Sharad Bhatia 30 December 2020

Very beautiful senryu

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Zuzu Mutairi 31 December 2020

Awesome Senryu. Nicely thought.

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Ricky Manhatten 07 January 2021

Classic haiku. I liked the message.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 December 2020

Scintillating senryu, Asim Sir. I have enjoyed a very lot.

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John Adezor 31 December 2020

The poem a wine to my soul

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Michael Jack 31 December 2020

Superb poem. Short and terse.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 31 December 2020

I am intoxicated by this poem.

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