Senryu - Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Moon

Rating: 5.0


balancing on palm
a pot filled with the water
to arrest the moon

Monday, November 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 28 November 2018

I am amazed at your brilliant concept! ''a pot filled with the water to arrest the moon '' - Wow...such powerful imagery...such juxtaposition...

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Flower Prince 26 November 2018

Hey, I love moon, You have made my day dear...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

You have beautifully noticed the reflection of moon in the pot water. When we balance palm of water also we can see full moon in reflection. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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