Senryu Il (Non Traditional) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu Il (Non Traditional)

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Eternal paradise
Hope's last destination
Electrifying mirage.

Savita Tyagi
Sunday, April 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,reflection
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Hans Vr 13 April 2016

Powerful lines. Eternal paradise. Sometimes I am convinced that our paradise here is just becoming... Our poetry is part of it :)

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Savita Tyagi 13 April 2016

Thank you so much Hans Vr. You said it right. A state of mind that is needed to indulge in poetry is no less than being in paradise.

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Ramesh Rai 12 April 2016

I was just watching Siya Ke Ram. Both are talking about beauty of nature and its mystery. Each and every creation of this nature is meaningful. You have precised with on seven words. Thanks for meeting. Regards.

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Stephen Park 10 April 2016

nice effort! but the poem has 19 syllable. It is 6/6/7, which is not a traditional senryu.... sorry to have to point this out,

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Savita Tyagi 10 April 2016

Thank you. I have marked it non traditional.

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