Senryu - 48 (Emotions Controlled) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 48 (Emotions Controlled)

Rating: 5.0


the scented candles
ignite the inner desires
emotions held back

Friday, October 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 17 October 2015

Nicely written Haiku, Master of Haiku in true sense.

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Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

Emotions can be held back, but never truly controlled..

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Loke Kok Yee 16 October 2015

Great emotional pull. Thanks

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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

Sad drop but a brilliant metaphor. Great.

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