Senryu - 47 (Your Dreamy Eyes) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 47 (Your Dreamy Eyes)

Rating: 5.0


Your dreamy eyes have
fathomless blue depths in it
intertwined with soul.

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,eyes,love,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

A comment is not enough to praise the beauty of your poem. Just going to hit the 10.

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* Sunprincess * 15 October 2015

......a dreamy poem so beautiful ★

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

A lovely Senryu, Mohammed. I would change It to Them to keep eyes plural.

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Loke Kok Yee 15 October 2015

you must be deeply in love to write such a sweet dreamy haiku, takes me back to my young days! Thanks

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