Senryu - 43 (Purity Lost) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 43 (Purity Lost)

Rating: 4.8


Flew out of my dreams
to real world, heart capsized,
purity vanished.

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2015

Deeply and nicely envisioned. Wonderful dream. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 04 January 2016

reality for me is I have to go to work today early

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T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

Dreams gets thumping at the hands of reality, well expressed.Liked it.10.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

There is a sad undertone to this senryu; how reality alters the beauty and the purity of dreams...

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Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

Reality always devours dreams, still we like to savour dreams inside our eyes. this is life! thank you.

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

How to preserve a dream in this world?

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