Senryu 31 (Life And Death) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Thought provoking and nicely encapsulated with insight. Focused and factual. Thanks for sharing, Savita.

A beautifully conceived thought provoking senryu and adroitly crafted too. Thanks for sharing.

Orange is peeled and fragrance is imparted, such is the revealing of good quqlities after death. Beautiful Senryu on life and death is amazigly shared.

A picture of life taking its last few breaths come to mind. Lovely senryu.

2 - **Hermit, a noun: " 1. a person living in solitude as a religious discipline. synonyms: recluse, solitary, loner, ascetic; More 2. a hummingbird found in the shady lower layers of tropical forests, foraging along a regular route. WHO KNEW THIS? ! bri :)

1 - i don't 'get' the meaning of first line. i suppose the orange died after imparting its fragrance. have you ever smelled a grapefruit tree blossom; it is divine! ! ! i have trouble thinking of a 'hermit'** as one who really lives. (cont.)

FRUIT YOU SELL MANY DON'T LOVE TO DEVOUR LIVE YOUR LIFE HAPPILY FORGET DEATH NOTHING HAPPENS THERE AFTER HAVE YOU SEEN A DEAD RAT EVER THAT IS REALITY READ HEREDITY THEORY