on her remembrance
i look back and my head spins
like rippled water
Head spins like rippled water. Very interesting Senryu is shared really. Marvelous presentation.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And when alarm stop the subconsciousness, its feel like a peeble step on the water surface...you always have a great senryu, haiku collection..make it in a physical copy one day...i will design you something special