Senryu - 165 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 165

Rating: 5.0


with her tiny hands
little girl makes the castle
waves destroys again

Thursday, July 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 07 July 2016

And so is the way of life. Excellent

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Rajnish Manga 08 July 2016

Lovely little poem but leaves a powerful impact. It says so much about life and its realities. These smaller poems (Haiku & Senryu) penned by you are such a delight to read as they unfold the realities and the philosophy of life. Thanks, Mohd. Asim ji.

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Nosheen Irfan 08 July 2016

That's how life is! It's a wonderful way to put life's vagaries. Loved it.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2016

Playing at the beach! Thanks for sharing.

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Chuy Amante 07 July 2016

nature always wins in spite of our best effort but we keep fighting!

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 July 2016

And she cries and then tries again..That's life, have to fight till the last breath. Awesome.10

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