Senryu - 118 A Life's Journey Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Senryu - 118 A Life's Journey
Evening shadows
play last symphony to say
goodbye to the sun.
Candles set to dance
for another chilling night
under silent moon.
Life passing away
Between realism and dreams
like the shifting scenes.
I like the last three lines..Between realism and dreams..simple yet simply superb...10+++++++++++
Outstanding poem on life. The images are simply superb.10 for sure.
This is a lovely mix of haikus and senryu, making a composite whole! A sure 10
life will never end life continues to thrill us no need to clock watch!
Candles set to dance! And, to respect a culture. Thanks for sharing.
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5/9/2024 3:16:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
That's how life sums up for all of us... And you have beautifully portrayed the shift of time with your beautiful words.10++++