See Through The Simple Things Poem by Aden Orie

See Through The Simple Things

Rating: 4.7


we all start the same,
no lies,
no problems,
no hopes,
no dreams,
nothing,
but as life goes on,
we start to lie,
but why?
what have you done,
the lies have begun,
and now you have issues,
and problems delt,
life isnt simple,
but remember how you felt?
when you started,
just pure and simple,
no lies, no worries, just life

but we all have hopes,
we all have dreams,
that need to be realized,
see through the simple things,
the things in life,
that we dont see,
see through the lies,
that carry me,
they have gotten me nowhere,
and i cant see,
you cant restart,
youve got 1 chance,

see through the simple things,
its hard to do,
but think of this,
will they remember you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

wow your such a great poet you have alot of talent

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Roland Bastien 05 May 2008

well done Aden. You are a true poet

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Roland Bastien 05 May 2008

well done Aden. You are a true poet

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Rebecca Howard 04 May 2008

we are just human remember that to error is our way we dont mean to but it happens every single day yes when we start out we are alway pure but that is dull without a doubt we will always lie for sure. love the poem. Rebecca

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 May 2008

Sometime a lie acts to save a critical situation-its other name is diplomacy.

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