Secrets...Never Said Poem by shruti modi

Secrets...Never Said

Rating: 5.0


There are so many things you see,
There are so many things to say,
But, maybe they’re such that you cant seem to tell them.

They change you when they happen..
Your heart changes, your mind changes;
Even the loudest mouth keeps it inside..
Takes it to the grave without saying a word

You’re born, you journey life;
You have secrets that even the closest to you doesn’t know
It’s only yours! It’s something that just you would know!
It’s pure. It’s virgin.

You were born without it, but you’ll die with it…

So many things, people don’t know!
So many things, people don’t say!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 26 July 2008

I loved this poem, I am giving you a 10.

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

You asked for my feedback on your poems. The truth is this poem touched me, its is very true. There are so many secrets people have. And i have my own that i will most likely take to my grave.

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Rema Prasanna 28 July 2008

Shruti, there are so many secrets humans keep in their minds thank God mind mapping is not that successful.. I like the way you expressed secrets never said.. good work 10 from me Rema

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Rachael Settle 28 July 2008

thats very good Shruti! i like it. rachael

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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

waw, really nice, full of wisdom, great, i loved it

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

you are absolutely correct..u amazing great poem!

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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

Some secrets need to be kept hidden from the insolent society forever.......10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

SILENCE EXPRESSED WONDERFULLY IN WRDS....

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

secret nicely told! and it acts life a tip to the life's part and parcel

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Susan Jarvis 14 August 2008

An insightful observation eloquently penned. S :)

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