Alone Poem by shruti modi

Alone

Rating: 5.0


In the crowd, I stand alone
Noticeable but unnoticed,
Loveable but unloved,
Caring but uncared.

Certain lines cannot be changed,
People walking together, move ahead..
Find new companions, friends.

Alone do I stand,
With everybody, but without anyone for me
I am lost..fearing, shivering.
Loved ones find new ones to love;
Alone do I live, so will I die,
But cant find anybody for a laughing, joyous journey till the end.

Isolated, over self egoist and sacred
In secured, yes! ?
Where are the friends may I ask, who leave me behind and go
Find new ones and forget the old..

Life I still smile disguising my sadness;
Find me a friend, who understands,
Help my heart which doesn’t trust, trust someone
Wait till believe and make the journey …

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

Again, another outstanding poem Shruti. Another 10 for you! Great job, Linda

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Daniel Allen 28 July 2008

I enjoy this poem, it shows what happens as you grow older. While in high school clicks begin to form, and you lose friends that you thought would always be with you.

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Gerhard Knight 30 July 2008

I know exactly how you feel - excellently written

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David Paigneau 30 July 2008

Very simple and straight words to express in a powerful way this universal feeling. Very encouraging, keep on good work!

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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

oh my god.this is really poetry in its most delightful form, i love it.

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Harsh Thakar 22 February 2010

____________________________________________________________________ Very well Described, I can connect my self with it as I feel the same. Between the people but still all alone….So Alone! ! ! ____________________________________________________Harsh___________

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C. P. Sharma 30 April 2009

Eloquent loneliness. Arnold says, 'We mortal millions live alone.' As for love, trust begets trust, distrust leads nowhere. When there is trust, there is no questioning. CP

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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

A fine description of your solitude. The urge to get rid of this has been put in compact but meaningful words.........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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premji premji 03 November 2008

none can be a poet unless hurt by love...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 15 September 2008

A very calm yet intense poem. thanks

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