Searching For Poets More Lonely Than I Poem by Not Long Left

Searching For Poets More Lonely Than I

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Staring at strangers poems
for hours on end,
no point trying to pretend
that I am not lonely.
Coming home after a days
work, numbed on Edens apples.
I walk through the door,
meet the cheek of my apparent lover,
Turn it on,
watch the red turn to green.
then aim my eyes at the screen,
Enter the site,
and spend the remaining night,
reading strangers poems,
searching for someone more lonely than I

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 18 February 2006

I like the way you say it, Vincey. I like it a lot. And Vincey, the 'I' in thsi poem could be me as well. Warm regards, Gina.

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kskdnj sajn 18 February 2006

Vincent the honsety in this poem is amazing...I think you should post this on the forum, they need a little humanity in there..(if you're not afraid of Destructive critisism..lol) Good write! A lonely soul... :) Angie

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