First And Last Love Poem..... Poem by Not Long Left

First And Last Love Poem.....

Rating: 5.0


And now the time has come my love
To end this wretched war of change
To cut these restricting choking reigns
To say the words enough is enough.

A feeling that killed a thousand poets
As it poisened their thoughts and pen.
Time now to lower the flag on the turrets
If there is no peace then why pretend.

I shall miss you like a ciggarete
For you damage me yet I need you so
Your taste, and smell I shall not forget
But now your smoke I must blow.

This bed shall beg for your return
This heart shall harden for a while
But I shall remember and I shall learn
That peace cannot be found in denial.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 21 August 2006

Love and cigarettes! I enjoyed how you pulled that off - kudos!

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Nick Percowycz 20 August 2006

This poem is extremely well written! Vincent, you are shining very bright right now! Excellent! A perfect 10.

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